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Phoenix Rising Chapter 1 - revision

Mon Mar 30, 2009, 11:46 PM
Been busy, but pretty soon I'm going to start revisions on my first chapter. Any critiques from anybody would be very appreciated before I start on them. I'd like to know what any potential readers like or do not like about it.

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